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MaMakoto Said That It Was Okay...

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Guess who found her tablet again :iconhurrhurrplz: (I totally felt like this fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/201… when I was reunited with it xD)

Okay, note that most of the text in this "comic" (?) is from Lukas Graham's song - "Mama Said"
Link: www.youtube.com/watch?v=B0fFTo… (if the link doesn't work and you wanna listen to the song, just search for it on YouTube. I'm sure people from outside Denmark should be able to listen to it (and yes, the song is in English.))

I'm actually not a huge fan of the song (well, the song sounds great, it's the lyrics that bother me). To me, it sounds like Graham is kinda whining about a lot of stuff that's really not that tragic. But anyway, the song's message still stands strong when applied to someone with real problems (I'm not claiming to know just how hard a life Graham has had. Maybe it was worse than this song makes it sound like. I'm not one to know.)

Also, first Free! fanart, whoooo!

This is just a random OC child of Makoto and Sousuke I came up with for the sake of the comic. Blame this lovely lady :iconxotakumix: for making me go insane with this couple... They are just too gay to function (- I meant to say too cute to function, but I liked the Mean Girl's reference better, lol xD)
- By the way, I don't like it when people refer to a man as "mother" (*cough* fanfiction), but MaMakoto fit perfectly into this song and there had to be a mom so... sorry, Makoto, you're more like a woman than Sousuke will ever be xD

Anyway, have a great evening everyone :D

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This was a very sweet little strip! Bullying is never a light topic, but you did very well with the reactions to it. The different ways Makoto and Sousuke responded fit well with their character and with Makoto as the mom and Sousuke as the dad.

The layout of this is very good. Having a couple of the blocks just be text makes it more impactful and stand out more. I like the way you've drawn it, they look more original but you can still tell the characters that they're supposed to be.

Personally, I think this comic has a good, strong impact because of the way Makoto and Sousuke respond. I always like it when the parents are caring, and this feels really sweet!

And I just wanted to say that those last 2 frames made me laugh!

Good job!