I postponed my homework yet again. Not good! Oh well, at least I got something done unlike other days where I just stare into space xD Yeah, homework isn't a joy for me at all xD
Kid could never sleep without his dear eight *-*! Lord Death looks kinda sad... Probably because his son is drooling in his sleep... or just because kid has pictures of symmetrical boobies in his room xD?
I really enjoy it, because I never would have thought of that!!! It has much originality because I've never seen something like it, humor, due to the sleeping with the 8, drool, and symmetrical boobs...(who knew kid was a perv?)...I quite enjoy it, though, but I had to admit, you got points taken off for his perviness, but I do think it was funny, so you got points for humor. I don't want to seem unfair, because you really are very good. Peace people! Everyone, please keep drawing!!!!
I really hope it was good, this is my second critique writing.
you have.. -good art skills -good technique -originality -classical lord death advertisement -fanservice -comedy -pairings (canon, even) by definition the fangirls must approve :3 except for the lack of cat-parts which it TOTALLY fine by me.
But in all seriousness, you did good. Unity, color choice and contrast, theme, creativity. Far better than an average deviant's positioning, angles, shadow, wrinkles, you get what I mean. One vital flaw is the eights in the frame looks like woman's bosoms. And I think it's just me when I say his hair it too thin but everyone seems to do that. Awesome job, I see improvement in your work.
-good art skills
-good technique
-originality
-classical lord death advertisement
-fanservice
-comedy
-pairings (canon, even)
by definition the fangirls must approve :3
except for the lack of cat-parts which it TOTALLY fine by me.
But in all seriousness, you did good. Unity, color choice and contrast, theme, creativity. Far better than an average deviant's positioning, angles, shadow, wrinkles, you get what I mean. One vital flaw is the eights in the frame looks like woman's bosoms. And I think it's just me when I say his hair it too thin but everyone seems to do that. Awesome job, I see improvement in your work.
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