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I got this idea for a comic and this is the "prequel" to it.

I know, I know, this is far from my best work. It's really bad, actually -_-'
Before I finish part 2 and submit it, I'll probably redraw this and give it colors and such instead. Just thought I would share it with you since I don't know when I'll get time to draw again. I seriously need to catch up with school!

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Vision- great, the thing is funny to look at and has a good sense what the gang will do in the future, maybe you should show them at their jobs to give more eye candy

Originality- i never seen what gang has done after school. I seen people do it but only tell about them in couples, which i love but is continous. Good job

Technique - the color make them look as a foreshadow to the past but could add a little more color, also you need a little work on drawing the boys musle because kids arms look to big

Impact- it shows what they will do in the future thats more realisitic in the regular world but no so much for adventure. But it was cool to look at
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Vision- I love the fact that you uses shades instead of colours and that the shading is almost perfect. And is kid wearing a skirt or?

Orginality- I've seen quite a few of these. But it isn't so common.

Technique- I find that the angles and position is well fit and calibrated,(IS this even tech?)

Impact- Its quite nice to see what they'd look like when they are older. The impact for me is great.

Over all, I think this is amazing. Good job. Sorry if my critique sucks, it's my first. But seriously, very well-done and clean. I bid you good ulck with more of your work. Continue the great work.
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~Akira-Okuzaki Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like it but kids outfixx looks wrong to me for some reson
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*LoveToTheCucumber Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm not a very good clothing designer xD Not taken, haha ^^
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~Akira-Okuzaki Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me to it takes me days to think of an outfit even after i'v done the layout for something even if i trace something an i try to put an cloths on them i'll stile take me a day to find something that looks just right
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*LoveToTheCucumber Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Note taken* LOL xD!
Yeah, that never happens to me. I just can't get the clothing right xD Probably because the clothes I walk in are so boring and none creative that I can't relate xD!
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~RainyMeadows Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I don't know why, but I always envision an adult Death the Kid as looking kinda like Aragorn from Lord of the Rings.

He could have the Lines of Sanzu in his beard.
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*LoveToTheCucumber Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol xD Oh Kami, the lovely dane, Viggo Mortensen *-* Maybe he could look like that xD? But I wouldn't want my dear Kid to have a beard D:
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~RainyMeadows Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Eh, maybe it's just me (but you have to admit that having the Lines of Sanzu in his beard would be pretty damn cool)
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*LoveToTheCucumber Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I admit, it could look pretty cool xD!
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:iconitalianember77:
Black star in MMA is the best idea ever. I like this continue please
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*LoveToTheCucumber Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks^^! I'll try to continue it soon, but I'm very busy at the moment D:
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