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And They Grew Up - Part 1 by LoveToTheCucumber And They Grew Up - Part 1 by LoveToTheCucumber
Major file alert, lol xD
I got this idea for a comic and this is the "prequel" to it.

I know, I know, this is far from my best work. It's really bad, actually -_-'
Before I finish part 2 and submit it, I'll probably redraw this and give it colors and such instead. Just thought I would share it with you since I don't know when I'll get time to draw again. I seriously need to catch up with school!
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Critique by Soul-cool-Eater Nov 7, 2012, 4:05:13 PM
Vision- I love the fact that you uses shades instead of colours and that the shading is almost perfect. And is kid wearing a skirt or?

Orginality- I've seen quite a few of these. But it isn't so common.

Technique- I find that the angles and position is well fit and calibrated,(IS this even tech?)

Impact- Its quite nice to see what they'd look like when they are older. The impact for me is great.

Over all, I think this is amazing. Good job. Sorry if my critique sucks, it's my first. But seriously, very well-done and clean. I bid you good ulck with more of your work. Continue the great work.
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Vision- great, the thing is funny to look at and has a good sense what the gang will do in the future, maybe you should show them at their jobs to give more eye candy

Originality- i never seen what gang has done after school. I seen people do it but only tell about them in couples, which i love but is continous. Good job

Technique - the color make them look as a foreshadow to the past but could add a little more color, also you need a little work on drawing the boys musle because kids arms look to big

Impact- it shows what they will do in the future thats more realisitic in the regular world but no so much for adventure. But it was cool to look at
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solosnowangel Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
good picture! although i just can't see soul being a businessman

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LoveToTheCucumber Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're not the only one, apparently xD
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XBloodyScourge13x Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
Smexy boys X3
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LoveToTheCucumber Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehe, they try xD
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XBloodyScourge13x Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
X3
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jellycat1 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wait why's soul a business man ???
I thought he would be a death scythe or any thing cooler
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LoveToTheCucumber Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I thought a business man would suit his personality ^^ And if he was just a death scythe, it would be kind of boring since I was going for a sort of alternative universe. Except for Kid. I guess he's just supposed to resemble a school principle.
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Akira-Okuzaki Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like it but kids outfixx looks wrong to me for some reson
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LoveToTheCucumber Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm not a very good clothing designer xD Not taken, haha ^^
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Akira-Okuzaki Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me to it takes me days to think of an outfit even after i'v done the layout for something even if i trace something an i try to put an cloths on them i'll stile take me a day to find something that looks just right
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LoveToTheCucumber Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Note taken* LOL xD!
Yeah, that never happens to me. I just can't get the clothing right xD Probably because the clothes I walk in are so boring and none creative that I can't relate xD!
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RainyMeadows Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I don't know why, but I always envision an adult Death the Kid as looking kinda like Aragorn from Lord of the Rings.

He could have the Lines of Sanzu in his beard.
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LoveToTheCucumber Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol xD Oh Kami, the lovely dane, Viggo Mortensen *-* Maybe he could look like that xD? But I wouldn't want my dear Kid to have a beard D:
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RainyMeadows Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Eh, maybe it's just me (but you have to admit that having the Lines of Sanzu in his beard would be pretty damn cool)
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LoveToTheCucumber Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I admit, it could look pretty cool xD!
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ItalianEmber77 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
Black star in MMA is the best idea ever. I like this continue please
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LoveToTheCucumber Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks^^! I'll try to continue it soon, but I'm very busy at the moment D:
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Animelover1300 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student Writer
Its awesome I LOVE it
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LoveToTheCucumber Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank yooooou :iconloveloveplz:
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Animelover1300 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student Writer
OH you're welcome XD
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ShadowMonsterChick Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I cracked up as soon as I saw Soul's. I love Kid's. And Black*Star's suits him well.
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LoveToTheCucumber Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad it made you laugh ;D
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ShadowMonsterChick Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD I am too.
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killerninja123 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student Artist
I'm not sure if a business man fits Soul. I think he should be a muscian. Love the drawing , though! :D
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LoveToTheCucumber Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, thought about making him a pianist, but the businessman fit my comic idea better. Well, a musician could have done it as well... But I like the idea of him being all formal and stuff xD
Thanks :D
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